The Benefits of Playing Online Games|玩在线游戏的益处

The Benefits of Playing Online Games

玩在线游戏的益处

 

提示

　　近日台湾人在国际电玩赛事中屡创佳续，证明了只要有心，『行行皆可出状元。』透过网络，在线游戏让玩家们可以在游戏中进行密切的互动。而随着在线游戏的普及，除了以往对于在线游戏的负面刻板印象外，在线游戏其实也对人们也有许多正面的影响及帮助。请写一篇约 120 至 150 个单词（words）的英文作文，文分两段，第一段以 There are several benefits to playing online games. 开头；第二段则以 While online games are most popular among teenagers, people of all ages can benefit from them. 开头并加以发展。

 

写作小栈

1.   主题句引导写作（guided writing）必须使用所指定的主题句（topic sentence）作为段落的开头，以主题句开头后，接着以下段落所有的句子都必须支持这个主题的指示方向进行，也就是思路的发展要符合主题句，如此才不会离题。

2.   依据提示的主题句，第一段重点在于列举玩在线游戏的几个好处，第二段则要说明不同年纪的人也可以藉由玩在线游戏而获得益处。

 

构思方向

第一段：   说明玩在线游戏对于人们有何益处，写作重点在于 what 和 how，以 4 至 6 句列举在线游戏的好处，并说明在线游戏如何在现实生活中对人们产生帮助。

第二段：   说明在线游戏为何适合所有年龄层的人玩，写作重点在于 who 和 how，以 4 至 6 句说明哪些人会从在线游戏获得好处，最后再强调玩在线游戏绝对是一种有意义的活动。

 

动动脑（Brainstorming）

利用 2 W (what + who) + 1 H (how)

第一段 a. What are some benefits of playing online games?

b. How can these benefits help people in real life?

第二段 a. Who can benefit from playing online games?

b. How can older people benefit from playing online games?

结论句 Playing games online is definitely a worthwhile activity and not a waste of time.

 

大纲

第一段引导句：There are several benefits to playing online games.

a.   Online games help quicken people's reflexes and speed up their reaction times.

b.   People can make use of these abilities in real life to help them in different ways.

第二段引导句：While online games are most popular among teenagers, people of all ages can benefit from them.

a.   Older people can play number or word games.

b.   By playing these games, their minds can stay active and sharp.

第二段结论句：Therefore, playing games online is definitely a worthwhile activity and not just a waste of time, as some people believe.

 

范文

　　There are several benefits to playing online games. For one thing, they help develop people's reflexes. Many games force players to react very quickly in order to be successful. Thus, people who become good at online games can use these skills in real life to help them in many ways.

　　While online games are most popular among teenagers, people of all ages can benefit from them. Older people can do number games like Sudoku or word games like Scrabble or Words with Friends. By focusing on playing these games, their minds can stay active and sharp.

 Therefore, playing games online is definitely a worthwhile activity and not just a waste of time as some people believe.

　　玩在线游戏有几项好处。首先，在线游戏有助于使人们的反应能力更为发达。许多游戏迫使玩家做出非常迅速的反应才能取得胜利。因此，那些成为在线游戏高手的人可以将这些技能使用在现实生活中的许多方面，藉此获得协助。

　　虽然在线游戏在青少年之间最受欢迎，但所有年龄层的人都能从中受益。老年人可以和朋友玩些像是数独的数字游戏或像是英文拼字或填字的文字游戏。藉由玩这些游戏而集中注意力的同时，老年人的头脑可以保持活跃和敏锐。因此，玩在线游戏绝对是一项有意义的活动，而非有些人认为的只是在浪费时间而已。

以下为以『在线游戏的缺点』为题的范文

　　Parents and teachers know something most teenagers don'tpending too much time playing online games is a really bad idea. There are several disadvantages to playing online games. When people play these games, they waste their time. In other words, they are not doing the things they should be doing. For example, students who are addicted to online games will most likely see their grades suffer. This can have a very harmful effect on their future.

　　Since addiction to online games can be quite serious, it's important to try and fight the urge to play. Start by reducing the amount of time each day or week that you spend playing the games. If it's your friends who are addicted, remind them often about the disadvantages of spending too much time playing online games. Invite them out to get them away from the computer. It can be difficult to stop an online addiction, but it's necessary to work hard to do so.

 

　　家长和老师都知道某些大多数青少年所不知道的事──花太多时间玩在线游戏是非常糟的主意。玩在线游戏对人们有几个不利之处。人们玩在线游戏时，他们浪费了时间。换句话说，他们没有做他们所应该做的事情。举例来说，那些沉迷于在线游戏的学生很有可能会见到他们的成绩变差。这对他们的未来可能会造成非常不利的影响。

　　由于沉迷于在线游戏可能是相当严重的问题，所以试着克服想玩的冲动是很重要的。一开始可以藉由减少每天或每周花在玩游戏上的时间。假如沉迷于在线游戏的人是你朋友的话，就要经常提醒他们花太多时间玩在线游戏的缺点。邀约他们出去走走，让他们远离计算机。要戒掉玩在线游戏的瘾可能很难，但努力做到是有其必要性的。